What im up to?

Im currently working on a report about networking, I have anaylized my network and put all the people i think can help me in this indistry like comapnies, freelancers, events and people from uni. I have also approached a couple of company asking them some question that i could add to my report, I have also asked about work placements and for them to look at my portfolio.

I have made an attemp at designing my network but im not sure if it really works.